So I basically can't say I like the monologue I wrote. The reason for this is because I didn't write enough. I felt like I held back too much in some important areas. I'm not even sure if the things I said in the monologue made any sense.
The speech didn't go anywhere. There were all kinds of things I'm sure I would have loved to have Spencer (the boy that talks in the monologue) talk about. All I did was make him come off as some pissy little boy that only likes to complain about the kids around him. (Holden?)
Spencer is a fictional character from a short story I came across. I found him to be very entertaining and relatable. His snarky attitude and sarcastic wit was what made me want to have him be the speaker of the monologue.
If I could make any changes, I'd probably end up adding a lot more information about Spencer's personal life. But hey, maybe Mr. Kunkle will like it.
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I think that your monologue sounds a little like Catcher in the Rye with they way you described it. I too am a little worried about what Kunkle will think of my monologue. My monologue seems to have very good action but I think that the voice in it could possibly be lacking. We will see how it all turns out.
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